Friday, December 9, 2011

Another Simple Poem

Garden By H. D.

I

You are clear
O rose, cut in rock,
hard as the descent of hail.

I could scrape the colour   
from the petals
like spilt dye from a rock.

If I could break you   
I could break a tree.

If I could stir
I could break a tree—
I could break you
 
 
Comment
In this poem I could possibly feel the writer's feeling of the sanguine and tolerable feelings.
I expecially like the line that says I could scrape the colour from the petals becuase, everyone knows that it is not possible to scrape the coulour from petals, but it shows the writer's feeling of tolerable.

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